Version 2.0 -- Revised 14-Jun-96

Paper C: Instructions

Instructions to the Student Author

Create a single word processing document containing instructions for doing something. Be sure to read Chapter 19 in Lannon before attempting this assignment.

Topic Selection Select a procedure relevant to your major field or an area of interest. Choose a topic unrelated to your previous paper on descriptions. Your procedure must require at least three major steps. For suggestions, check the list on page 459.
Document Format Prepare double-spaced pages with one-inch borders and a monospaced Pica typewriter font (12-point Courier). Use only normal left justification as in this document, with ragged right margins. At the top of your first page, enter the title from the top of this page, followed by a descriptive subtitle, your name, short ID (letter-number) and the date. Minimally, your name, the date and page number must appear in a header on each page. Use the following three categories as subtitles.
Audience Write for a specific use by a specified audience. It must comprise beginners or lay persons in your field. Include an audience-and-use profile (page 60) adapted to your own professional preferences and purposes as needed.
Citation You must identify an authority for the procedure being taught, such as a user guide or reference manual. Provide a bibliographic citation appropriate to your disciplinary style.
Instructions Provide instructions in three to five pages as described in Chapter 19. Follow the General Model for Instructions given on pages 440-441.
Checklist Use the checklist on pages 455-456 to review your work.

Instructions to the Peer Editor

View the exercise set on screen or on paper.

  1. Add your comments to the screen or paper version.
  2. Suggest improvements, additions, or deletions as you judge to be appropriate.
  3. Does the document follow these instructions?
  4. Do the instructions given in the document seem usable?
  5. Are there any spelling or grammar errors?

 

Submit the following checklist with your annotations.

Evaluation Checklist for Paper C -- Instructions

Use this checklist to evaluate the assignment. Page numbers in parentheses refer to the first page of Lannon's textbook discussion.

---------------------   Content (3 points each)    ---------------------
 1.  Yes  Are all data sources documented? (394)
 2.  Yes  Have the audience and their needs been identified? (32)
 3.  Yes  Have the audience's attitude, personality and expectations
          been described? (32)
 4.  Yes  Does the project title promise exactly what the paper 
          delivers? (428)
 5.  Yes  Is the background adequate for this audience? (430)
 6.  Yes  Do explanations enable readers to understand what to do? (431)
 7.  Yes  Do examples enable readers to see how to do it correctly? (432)
 8.  Yes  Are the definition and purpose of each step given as needed? (443)
 9.  Yes  Is all needless information omitted? (431)
10.  Yes  Are all obvious steps omitted? (431)
11.  Yes  Do notes, cautions, or warnings appear whenever needed, 
          before the step? (433)
12.  Yes  Is the information rate appropriate for the reader's abilities and 
          the difficulty of the task? (431)
13.  Yes  Are visuals adequate for clarifying the steps? (429)
14.  Yes  Do visuals repeat prose information as needed? (429)
15.  Yes  Is everything accurate? (428)

---------------------  Organization (3 points each)  ---------------------
16.  Yes  Is the introduction adequate but not excessive? (441)
17.  Yes  Do the instructions follow the exact sequence of steps? (429)
18.  Yes  Is all the information for a step close together? (443)
19.  Yes  For a complex step, does each sentence begin on a new line? (436)
20.  Yes  Is the conclusion necessary and, if necessary, adequate? (445)

---------------------     Style (3 points each)     ---------------------
21.  Yes  Is the document written in grammatical English? (Appendix A)*
22.  Yes  Do introductory sentences have enough variety to maintain 
          interest? (436)
23.  Yes  Does each step have similar sentence structure? (436)
24.  Yes  Do steps generally have short sentences? (436)
25.  Yes  Does each step begin with the action verb? (436)
26.  Yes  Are all steps in the active voice and imperative mood? (434)
27.  Yes  Do all steps have parallel phrasing? (435)
28.  Yes  Are transitions adequate for marking time and sequence? (435)

---------------------     Format (3 points each)     ---------------------
29.  Yes  Does each heading clearly tell readers what to expect? (437)
30.  Yes  On a typed page, are steps single-spaced within, and 
          double-spaced between? (437)
31.  Yes  Do white space and highlights set off discussion from step? (437)
32.  Yes  Are notes, cautions, or warnings set off or highlighted? (437)
33.  Yes  Are visuals beside or near the step, and set off by white 
          space? (437)
* -- Item 21 is worth 4 points.


Once you are done with editing, provide your instructor with a copy of the edited assignment. Use electronic mail (e-mail) to submit a single file containing the original assignment, with your comments added both within the document and as a final note. In the e-mail subject field, place the Author ID, the assignment title, and your Editor ID.