thesis
 
Evidence Argument & Analysis Expression [organization, grammar & Syntax] Form & Style

 

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- Clear, strong, well-defined, FOCUSED thesis in intro
 
 
- ACCURATE INFERENCES drawn from primary & secondary sources

- Excellent use of all types of material, e.g., monographs, scholarly articles, etc.

- Accurate use of wide range of PRIMARY AND SECONDARY sources

- Citations from a variety of sources

- Well-chosen examples

- Fully appreciates, understands, and recognizes background for bias of sources used

- Adequate citations to allow reader to form critical opinion of range and use of sources

- Effective introduction

- Argument convincingly & adequately supports thesis

- Takes account of interpretations that diverge from one's own thesis

- Uses other historians' work appropriately to frame argument

- Clear, strong conclusion summarizing arguments

- Causal connections clear

- Insightful and original ideas

- Excellent command of topic and its historical context

- Convincing analysis

-- Excellent ORGANIZATION

- Skillful and sophisticated use of language

- Few or no spelling mistakes, punctuation errors, and grammatical problems

- Chooses words aptly to express exact meaning

- Smooth transitions b/w WELL-CONSTRUCTED AND CAREFULLY ORGANIZED paragraphs and ideas

- Properly formatted

- Adheres to appropriate rules of citation in footnotes and bibliography
 

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- Clear, SOUND thesis

- Consistent presentation of thesis
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

- Appropriate AND ACCURATE evidence

- Good use of all types of PRIMARY AND SECONDARY material

- Appreciates, understands, and recognizes background for bias of sources used

- Few minor problems with examples and citation

- Few minor problems with argument and causal connections

- Good sense of ideas

- One or two minor factual or conceptual problems

- Good command of topic and its historical context

-- Good ORGANIZATION

- Reads well but few minor grammatical or stylistic problems 

- Few problems with sentence constructions, word choice, transitions, punctuation

- Good presentation

- One or two minor problems with formatting, citation, footnotes, or bibliography

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- FAIR thesis - Limited use of PRIMARY AND SECONDARY sources/evidence

- SOME problems with accuracy, citation, selection of examples

- Partial development

- Some problems with argument

- Fair introduction and/or conclusion

- Fair analysis

-- FAIR COMMAND OF TOPIC AND ITS HISTORICAL CONTEXT

- Some unsupported or undeveloped generalizations and ideas

- Some problems with organization and arrangement

- Some grammatical and stylistic problems with transitions, sentence structure, word choice

- Fair presentation

- More frequent problems with formatting, citation, footnotes, or bibliography

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- WEAK, vague or peripheral thesis - Insufficient use of PRIMARY AND SECONDARY sources and evidence - Illogical arrangement of ideas

- Frequently narrates or summarizes

- Simplistic

-- TANGENTIAL COMMAND OF TOPIC AND ITS HISTORICAL CONTEXT

-- WEAK ORGANIZATION

- Major grammatical or typographical errors which distract from argument

- Frequently uses inexact words, clichés, colloquialisms

- Major problems with formatting, citation, footnotes, or bibliography
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- No thesis - Fails to cite sources or plagiarizes 

- Inaccurate information

- Little or no development of any kind of argument

- No or little analysis

- Failure to understand or undertake assignment

-- LITTLE OR NO ORGANIZATION

- Numerous and serious grammatical and typographical errors which result in incoherence

- Numerous and serious problems with formatting, citation, footnotes, or bibliography

 
 
 
 

AT TOP:
 

Thesis: The degree to which the thesis:

Evidence: The degree to which the writer's response: Argument and Analysis: The degree to which the argument: The degree to which the analysis: Expression [Organization, Grammar & Syntax]: The degree to which the paper: Form & Style: The degree to which the paper: