thesis
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Evidence | Argument & Analysis | Expression [organization, grammar & Syntax] | Form & Style | |
E X C E P T I O N A L |
- Clear, strong, well-defined, FOCUSED thesis in intro
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- ACCURATE INFERENCES drawn from primary & secondary
sources
- Excellent use of all types of material, e.g., monographs, scholarly articles, etc. - Accurate use of wide range of PRIMARY AND SECONDARY sources - Citations from a variety of sources - Well-chosen examples - Fully appreciates, understands, and recognizes background for bias of sources used - Adequate citations to allow reader to form critical opinion of range and use of sources |
- Effective introduction
- Argument convincingly & adequately supports thesis - Takes account of interpretations that diverge from one's own thesis - Uses other historians' work appropriately to frame argument - Clear, strong conclusion summarizing arguments - Causal connections clear - Insightful and original ideas - Excellent command of topic and its historical context - Convincing analysis |
-- Excellent ORGANIZATION
- Skillful and sophisticated use of language - Few or no spelling mistakes, punctuation errors, and grammatical problems - Chooses words aptly to express exact meaning - Smooth transitions b/w WELL-CONSTRUCTED AND CAREFULLY ORGANIZED paragraphs and ideas |
- Properly formatted
- Adheres to appropriate rules of citation in footnotes
and bibliography
|
T
H O R O U G H |
- Clear, SOUND thesis
- Consistent presentation of thesis
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- Appropriate AND ACCURATE evidence
- Good use of all types of PRIMARY AND SECONDARY material - Appreciates, understands, and recognizes background for bias of sources used - Few minor problems with examples and citation |
- Few minor problems with argument and causal connections
- Good sense of ideas - One or two minor factual or conceptual problems - Good command of topic and its historical context |
-- Good ORGANIZATION
- Reads well but few minor grammatical or stylistic problems - Few problems with sentence constructions, word choice, transitions, punctuation |
- Good presentation
- One or two minor problems with formatting, citation, footnotes, or bibliography |
A
D E Q U A T E |
- FAIR thesis | - Limited use of PRIMARY AND SECONDARY sources/evidence
- SOME problems with accuracy, citation, selection of examples |
- Partial development
- Some problems with argument - Fair introduction and/or conclusion - Fair analysis -- FAIR COMMAND OF TOPIC AND ITS HISTORICAL CONTEXT - Some unsupported or undeveloped generalizations and ideas |
- Some problems with organization and arrangement
- Some grammatical and stylistic problems with transitions, sentence structure, word choice |
- Fair presentation
- More frequent problems with formatting, citation, footnotes, or bibliography |
I
N A D E Q U A T E |
- WEAK, vague or peripheral thesis | - Insufficient use of PRIMARY AND SECONDARY sources and evidence | - Illogical arrangement of ideas
- Frequently narrates or summarizes - Simplistic -- TANGENTIAL COMMAND OF TOPIC AND ITS HISTORICAL CONTEXT |
-- WEAK ORGANIZATION
- Major grammatical or typographical errors which distract from argument - Frequently uses inexact words, clichés, colloquialisms |
- Major problems with formatting, citation, footnotes, or bibliography |
U
N A C C E P T A B L E |
- No thesis | - Fails to cite sources or plagiarizes
- Inaccurate information |
- Little or no development of any kind of argument
- No or little analysis - Failure to understand or undertake assignment |
-- LITTLE OR NO ORGANIZATION
- Numerous and serious grammatical and typographical errors which result in incoherence |
- Numerous and serious problems with formatting, citation, footnotes, or bibliography |
AT TOP:
Thesis: The degree to which the thesis:
Chooses words aptly to express exact meaning.